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Oh But a Speck Am I

I'd love to climb a Redwood tree Three hundred feet or more, A leviathan, forged in wood Sat on the forest floor. A mighty tree, a monument For centuries it has grown All this from a tiny seed That dwelt inside a cone. Oh but a speck am I As I stand next to thee, I think that I shall never see, A poem lovely as a tree. Entry for Famous poetic lines 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One Inspired by I think that I shall never see/A poem lovely as a tree - Joyce Kilmer 6/2/2020. Placed 3rd.

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Date: 2/10/2020 3:54:00 PM
Love this great poem.. Congratulations on your win. God bless..
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/10/2020 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Robert. :)
Date: 2/9/2020 3:39:00 PM
Your entry is a Fave for me Gary! I have seen these giants and indeed they make us seem so small. Some have endured fires. They are magnificent! Congratulations on your podium win my friend! xxoo
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/9/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Connie. :)
Date: 2/9/2020 8:31:00 AM
- Back with a well deserved congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/9/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 2/9/2020 6:43:00 AM
It would take a long time to climb that tree.. nice one. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/9/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 2/7/2020 12:04:00 PM
Taking in nature's majesty can certainly make us feel small in relation to the world and universe. I love the way you tied in the quote from Kilmer's poem. A perfect ending. Your writing is clearly interesting, skilled and easy to follow. Best wishes in Silent One's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/7/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. :)
Date: 2/6/2020 11:17:00 AM
Nice poem Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/6/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. :)
Date: 2/6/2020 10:45:00 AM
Nicely penned, Gary. Should do well!
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/6/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Daniel. :)
Date: 2/6/2020 7:34:00 AM
- Enormous trees ... "from a tiny seed" ... a great poem, Gary :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/6/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

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