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Watching, waiting for someone to feel, Smiling, starring unsuspecting heart to steal. Whistfully plotting special moments in time, Waiting for that moment to suggest you’re all mine. Intertwining friendship; peas and carrots they rhyme, Comforting softness, portraying everything’s fine. A net you will stay to watch from afar, Slowly subdued, an unrecognizable star. Builing upon time, these memories you see, Muted out your existence, nothing special to me. Sadness lingers amidst a desperately crying, I will still ignore you, I hope you feel like dying. A monumental day to celebrate you think, Go stand in line to get your own drink. I see that sadness in your hearts shining thru, My control captures happiness, me feeling like you. Why would I care, made to feel like my fault, Dry expectations, gathered from the salt. Be there to appreciate, all I have to say, Discontent looks of approval, I will ruin your day. A woman you feel, a woman you will be, Those retched angel eyes, undeserving man like me. When I give up, relationships break me in two, Like crude ocean oil, my tar will hurt you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/11/2018 2:58:00 PM
What a great rhyme! You deserved a win with this one, Chelcie.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/16/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work! So glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 9/25/2016 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.You did well.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/25/2016 10:10:00 PM
Thank You Darlene!! ( :
Date: 9/21/2016 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations Chelcie on the placement of the contest.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/21/2016 3:10:00 PM
Oh wow!! Thank you so much!! I'm honored! ( :
Date: 9/13/2016 12:32:00 PM
A great first offering, welcome to the soup.
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/13/2016 3:20:00 PM
Thank you!!! ( :
Date: 9/11/2016 9:41:00 AM
To the point with no fussing or stumbling. Bravo Poet!
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/12/2016 11:08:00 AM
You just know when people do things to get you to react poorly....then you don't....winner winner...no fussing or stumbling ( :
Date: 9/7/2016 12:51:00 PM
Chelcie D., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/8/2016 9:25:00 PM
Thank you Linda! I sent you a soup mail earlier as I didn't know where the reply button was lol! Chelcie
Date: 9/7/2016 11:29:00 AM
Chelcie Darling,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/8/2016 9:22:00 PM
I just figured out where the reply button is as I posted to your wall earlier lol Thank you so much for your reading my poem and commenting! I am just an ordinary person that likes to write poetry and really enjoys using it to reach others! Your new poetry friend, Chelcie

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