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Off To the Rat Race!

Laying there just beyond my touch, The envy of my eye, A world in despair. All plump and juicy, Full of any mans desire. A many of a souls hand in with a stake, Most of which pulled from another’s place. It’s a world confused, blinded by greed. If played by the rules You Could be left behind. You will have made a dime, By creating a crime. Torn between the two, We are all confined. If any were to jump to a rat race, a little or even a lap behind, There his life would be stuck the entire time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/30/2010 11:08:00 AM
greed indeed! brings suffering upon us
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Date: 11/23/2010 4:54:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with its creative theme... hope your time on the Soup will be special and fun.. check out the contests offered to members..good luck with luv..and a Happy Thanksgiving..
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Date: 11/22/2010 1:19:00 PM
Nice thoughts very meaningful you have penned on the Rat race. david
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup David. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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