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Off Limits

Off limits Yes Not available Taken to another level Discovered Life is life Unlimited, realistic values Unconditional measures.

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Date: 6/11/2019 6:56:00 PM
The simple language somehow brings a complexity to this little verse. It makes you think, makes you put the weight on each word as you come to it, but the end, "unconditional measures" seems to come full circle from the first line, "off limits". Interesting little jewel, this poem!
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Ms. Catherine
Date: 6/12/2019 11:50:00 AM
Caroline, Thank you.

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