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Off Duty Mum

Blurred, steamy mirror Scarlet innocent faces Clean, soap scented babes. Fluffy pyjamas Tales of elves and fairylands Cuddles from cherubs. Fight to stay awake So not one adventure missed Go play with your dreams. Peek in, one last time Gentle snores break the silence Creep out, tiptoe down. Hot cocoa, slippers Claim control of the remote My job as Mum, done. Jodie Williams For Francine's Morning, noon or night senryu's contest 25 Aug 2011

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Date: 8/31/2011 10:14:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on your win in Francine's contest.Beautiful Senrus here.
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:09:00 PM
Congrats Jodie on your exciting win with this fascinating poetry in the contest luv.. superb..
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Date: 8/30/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:15:00 AM
hey Jodie congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:32:00 PM
congrats Jodie on your 7th place win in the contest, great job
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:01:00 PM
I LOVE yours, Jodie. It's very much like what my daughter would write if she were doing this. The last one is the BEST one, when you finally got the CONTROL
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