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Of Reeds and Flowered Dreams

For some of us, the dream of love is tender as a seed which, sown in fertile hopeful minds, grows common as a reed. A stalwart grass, with no rare scent; no fancy blooms to see; no passion’s rose, it merely stands with nothing grand to be. It shelters me, this simple reed that slightly bends in breeze. But winds of lust I do not feel, to bring me to my knees. And taste of bliss I do not know; I dream the fantasy, for fertile minds can still create a rose through poetry. Strand Completely New(6),Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/10/2020 3:48:00 PM
"for fertile minds can still create a rose through poetry" - beautiful ending line; makes it a masterpiece, my friend.
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:46:00 PM
I love your skillfulness in rhyming, Andrea, an admirable composition truly, my compliments in your fine TOP win at 1st Place -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/8/2020 12:00:00 PM
Andrea, this is so lovely. Uniquely creative juxtaposition of roses and reeds - I think of cattails. Congratulations on your top win! Sending you blessings.
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:47:00 AM
Congrats, my friend. I love it. Blessings.
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on a first place win with your lovely poem, Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2020 2:47:00 AM
Wow, your last stanza took my breath away: "And taste of bliss I do not know; I dream the fantasy, for fertile minds can still create a rose through poetry." Beautiful !!!Congratulations for a TOP WIN!! A FAVE!!
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Date: 7/7/2020 11:56:00 PM
I love the roses you create through poetry, Andrea, here and elsewhere. Your mind is as fertile as they come. Thank you for the many bouquets you grace us with ~ John
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:58:00 PM
Very nice, Andrea.
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:35:00 PM
Dream of love tender as a seed--lovely write Andrea. The last line resonates.
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Date: 7/6/2020 5:11:00 PM
Love the flow of this one Andrea Tom
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