of rape and shame

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Bitesize Contest no.80 Poetry Contest
sponsored by Line Gauthier 01/11/24 HMS

of rape and shame now her perfume’s gone fresh compost came to reclaim then a bud appeared earlier than expected should mulch propagate his name

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 1:59:00 AM

How shameful is rape but at least it leads to healing.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/13/2024 3:43:00 AM

I can only imagine the healing takes a very long time Victor if ever, the victims need support and should be allowed to choose for themselves what path to take in the whole healing process, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2024 8:24:00 AM

A terryfying experience for sure David, if it was down I'd castrate the rapists. Shame for some that end up having the scumbags baby. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/12/2024 8:53:00 AM

Absolutely Tom, I’m with you, I believe the victim should always be allowed choose, and end such pregnancies! Have a good one cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2024 10:50:00 AM

David your Tanka "of rape and shame" seems to be the renewal and rebirth of life after a traumatic experience. It seems to deal with the aftermath of a violation, despite the dark connotations, you also suggest hope and regeneration through the imagery of compost reclaiming, a bud appearing. Well done my friend.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/11/2024 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad! I suppose on the whole this one uses flora and fauna metaphor to express the natural process of life and regeneration, but I believe as intelligent human beings (women) who underwent a traumatic event (rape) should have choice to interfere with nature! Cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 1/11/2024 9:35:00 AM

I'm not sure mulch gets the credit, but I'll put the blame on the crappy compost.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/11/2024 9:42:00 AM

Indeed Lin that’s why I believe a woman should have choice to nip it in the bud! Controversial perhaps, Cheers David