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Of Raindrops

Raindrops On tin rooftops Wash away dirt and dust And broken gutters make a nice Shower Raindrops On tin rooftops Encore of happiness Children splashing on flooded lawns Rejoice

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Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 7/11/2013 8:53:00 PM

Wow, this is really exciting and refreshing poem :D love it Mike :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2013 7:36:00 AM

I like this picture you have painted.

Michael Dom
Date: 7/11/2013 10:07:00 AM

Richard, I thank you for your appreciation.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/21/2013 1:40:00 AM

It's a wonderful sound, raindrops on tin roofs. Just puts your mind at rest. Well penned cinquains... I enjoyed it's simplicity.

Michael Dom
Date: 7/11/2013 10:08:00 AM

Timothy, simplicity appeals to me. I thank you for your appreciation.