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Of Onions and Peaches

Unwrap an onion and find beneath the layers nothing but tears. While the peach beneath the fuzz and the succulent flesh yields a hard but sometime fertile stone to carry the future

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Date: 3/17/2014 1:52:00 PM
In one of my blues poems I wrote "Love is like an onion. Keeps me crying all the time."
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/17/2014 2:25:00 PM
So true - thanks for reading and commenting
Date: 2/27/2014 10:18:00 AM
A clever write.
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Date: 1/21/2014 9:35:00 PM
Yup. Did you ever try growing one. I have a son who gets a kick out of seeing how many different kinds of seeds he can coax into growing. He has grown avacado, lemon, apples, peach, orange seeds, and acorns. Cool, actually.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/21/2014 10:07:00 PM
Cool, and thanks for reading. We've occasionally had them germinate from our compost but never grown. We do grw\ow onions, leeks and garlic.

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