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Of One Mind

Only you would have the ability to Fight against your Own better judgment and do Nothing to gain Eternal wisdom and be a Massive pain! It's time for you to bind your Neverending Destructive thoughts and be of one mind, not four.

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Cecil Hickman

Date: 10/5/2008 8:49:00 PM

very very well written acrostic with a wonderful thought provoking title and the words speak volumes of your wisdom,,,well done and thank you for reading my poem and leaving your words behind,,blessings..Cecil

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 9/30/2008 9:03:00 AM

This poem works on several levels. It could be an example of self-talk or of constructive criticizm(sic) of another person. Very good however you meant this sound advise posing as a poem.

Date: 9/28/2008 1:54:00 PM

Interesting use of this challenging form. This poem gives the reader pause for thought. Best wishes with your writing. Karen