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Of Motion and Stillness

OF MOTION and STILLNESS The meer now seen in frantic action spate The feathered life all bustling with a will Intent on search for food or for a mate Active throughout, no place for body still The constant motions all across the lake Speak clearly of a powerful intent Survival that each specie seeks to make By feed and breed and family extent But down the river all is calm and cool Through boughs sun dapples stream with gold motif The pebbled bed now gleams with nature’s jewels While on the bank - a motionless relief In essence still and splendid stands the tree Sublime and simple purpose thus: To Be 6 August 2020

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Date: 11/1/2020 6:26:00 PM
... Glad to find your marvellous writing today, Geoffrey. Poignancy you have created here of motion and stillness at the lake is immense. Truly a fine, easy to digest, useful poem.
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Date: 8/27/2020 6:13:00 AM
Love it! And I know that you would agree...that even a great poem will forever remain subordinate. For "I think there will never be...a poem...."
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/27/2020 6:16:00 AM
A very perceptive and apt comment, Joe. Thank you.
Date: 8/16/2020 3:17:00 PM
Wonderful penning, 'vintage Geoffrey Brewer,' I'd say. I'm wondering. While I wasn't checking rhyme and meter tightly, is this really a sonnet?! It has 14 lines for starters... Kudos, Gershon
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/16/2020 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon. You are absolutely right; it was originally submitted as a sonnet, but I altered tha label in order to put it in a contest requiring ‘Rhymes’ (It does rhyme). Well spotted!
Date: 8/11/2020 8:37:00 PM
Geoffrey, Ah the gift of trees. Though perhaps predisposed to remain still you managed to capture the tranquil majesty in that which chose only 'To Be'. -Richard
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/16/2020 7:53:00 PM
Thank you for your eloquent appreciation, Raven.
Date: 8/11/2020 1:05:00 PM
what a glorious look at this location and the contrast of motion and stillness.Very well crafted poem. Hopefully for the nature contest?
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/16/2020 7:52:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments, Andrea.

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