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Of Love Perverse

For you and only you, my love, I’ll wait. I’ll wait through evening’s dusk to early dawn. On corners or at stations; by my gate I’ve waited - and at night with curtains drawn. The hands of time keep moving, stroke by stroke. My calendar I’ve marked and then remarked. What muse of tempering may I invoke to cool these everlasting flames you’ve sparked? Please come to me, unholy knight of love! I cling to threadbare promises you made. My tarrying I've grown so weary of while off again you go on some crusade. Fine gallant you are not, but - oh, perverse! A heart grown fonder lingering is my curse. (What I should have written to an old crush of mine whose modern day crusades consumed his life!)

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Date: 3/21/2020 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your first placement in Brian's contest Andrea. I can see why he chose this for a top winner. xxoo
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:14:00 PM
Andrea, lovely poem filled with the anguish of love not returned. Wonderful images - "threadbare promises" This is a feeling all of us can relate to as we see our dreams of a possibility just not become real. Congratulations on your first place.
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Date: 3/21/2020 12:34:00 AM
Back to say a hearty congrats for your #1 win on one of your finest sonnets.
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Date: 1/24/2020 11:57:00 PM
Pure poetry. The one that got away... such a timeless theme. I can think of a couple individuals who incited these feelings in me (long ago, I should add!) Happy memories, or unrequited regret, hmmm. Love "What muse of tempering may I invoke / to cool these everlasting flames you’ve sparked?" Great, great sonnet from the mistress of sonnets.
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Date: 12/1/2016 1:02:00 PM
My congratulations Andrea, well done...
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Date: 12/1/2016 3:57:00 AM
Congrats Andrea. I really liked "A heart grown fonder lingering is my curse."
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Date: 12/1/2016 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations for your nice win for this beautiful poem ...
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Date: 11/30/2016 5:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2016 5:18:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea in the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:07:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:50:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! I'm sure your poem touched many--including me--who remember trusting someone whose promises were never to be fulfilled! Janice
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:07:00 AM
Wonderful expressions Andrea! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/21/2015 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations.....
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:07:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats again:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:55:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one, Andie. Congrats! Hmmn...should have entered too my poem of same title as the theme which won in Charlotte's contest before. You gave me an idea. Thanks and hugs!
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Date: 4/30/2015 8:02:00 PM
ANDREA, ONCE AGAIN Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2015 12:14:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Andrea - I wonder what would have transpired if you had written it sooner. Personally I would have liked to see it place MUCH higher than an HM:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2015 6:59:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on the win
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:30:00 PM
I like it and congrats! ...poems are always looked at with one eye.
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:19:00 PM
Well, this just goes to show you how different judges see our poems. It was a big winner before and an HM now..go figure. As always, congrats...BG
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/28/2015 4:53:00 PM
Your comment is very much appreciated. I am having a bad week at Soup all around. hahaha. Maybe my moon sign is in a bad house or something!
Date: 4/26/2015 10:16:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/26/2015 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on this successfully write.
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Date: 5/11/2013 10:44:00 PM
You should have written it to him, Andrea. It would have been irresistible.-Red
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:00:00 AM
This is beautiful Andrea. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/30/2012 8:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Nice going. I have been inactive on PS since Aug, due to my wifes serious illness. Thanks for your comments. Take care and God bless. luv, Ralph
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