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Of Light Rays

The light appears Behind rare scene Seer astounds Greatest of sight Of light bouncing Come bright colors Placed over truth Light proof inside Uncouth passing
Russell Sivey Entrant into nette onclaud's "** THAN-BAUK A TWILIGHT" contest 4/11/2012

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  1. Date: 4/11/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Interesting work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:59:00 PM
    brilliantly written Russell.. an exhilarating expression of rhyme in this tricky form luv.. good luck in contest.. uncouth passing is so tremendous luv..

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 8:02:00 AM
    beautiful than bauk, russell

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 2:12:00 AM
    thanks for joining, russell.. so nice!.. kindly check rhyme pattern and syl count... i have placed an example on the contest page.. if you need to revise, just edit and update your poem... will do another blog on this later!:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 12:49:00 AM
    boldly amazing.well done.

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 11:30:00 PM
    Very well done Russell : ) Blessings, bren