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Of Crimson of Rose of Fire of Love

Each delicate thought untouched and untamed flickering a light of beauty ingrained For in a moment minuet and unstained reflect's a great love where memories remain Each delicate thought behold the new day evanescent fleeting yet forever shall stay of crimson...of rose...of fire...of love...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:47:00 AM

:-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's "Razor Sharp" contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 7/5/2013 3:18:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/5/2013 9:27:00 AM

Rick, your understanding of feelings is razor sharp...awesome write and win! Hugs

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/2/2013 7:51:00 AM

Rick I enjoyed the delightful poem congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2013 9:53:00 PM

Rick, :-) Congrats! with your awesome razor sharp poem................ SKAT

Nathan D.

Date: 7/1/2013 9:18:00 PM

congrats ' NATE

Constance La France

Date: 6/24/2013 7:54:00 AM

Rick, a lovely verse you have written, well done and I also want to thank you for my placement in your Tanka Contest, I am very honoured, Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2013 11:52:00 PM

I love how you combined crimson, which usually is such a passionate color, with the delicateness of love. Very unique and beautiful, Rick!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/22/2013 2:01:00 PM

This is amazing Rick!Love it.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/22/2013 12:21:00 PM

Wow! This is superb...flowing and musical. I'm so glad that I came by here to thank you for my place in your Tanka contest. I got to read this lovely poem! :) It is going to my favorites! :)