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Ode To the Wonder of It All

You walk the valley step by step with meadows along the way Bright beautiful flowers everywhere make my eyes want to tear River waters rush but not to deep, the fish swim freely Tall, tall, trees bending with the wind Blue skies above, birds flying high Down a narrow path walking in the woods The afternoon sun is bright, clouds over the mountains as far as you can see Animals are majestic you wonder in ah Noise you hear takes by breath away; birds chirping, water rushing, the peacefulness of it all As sunset begins the color of the sky turns orange Stars begin to come out against the dark sky. The moon rising over the mountain tops so bright and large you now can see You admire all that nature is

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/27/2015 1:29:00 AM
Nela, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/7/2015 11:32:00 PM
Nela, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful Ode, Neal, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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