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Ode To the Wind In the Trees

The wind blowing harshly on the trees Swirling them around Like green paint on a canvas The sound Is equal to that of drums Like cymbals A shimmer of noise Echoing and fading out It smells like summer The aroma of vacation and relaxation The breeze on your skin The coolness When you finally know what the trees are feeling The rare and overlooked moment When you can relate to them The taste of a breath of fresh air Is one that should be cherished forevermore You didn't know that you couldn't breathe before Until you finally inhaled The sweet taste of the wind

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Date: 6/24/2019 8:28:00 PM
Oh, your poem is so beautiful, Lily. I love the wind in the trees; 'a shimmer of noise' and I especially love your last three lines for a superb finale. Congratulations on your wonderful placement in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2019 10:28:00 AM
Wonderful! I can feel the freshness of the air thru the wind that blows on me, while enjoying the trees surrounds me.
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Date: 6/10/2019 11:54:00 AM
As a lover of the wind myself, I can relate-- congrats on your win, Lily Rose (great name)
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