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Ode To the Other Guy

this is the third angle, of a dreaded triangle. nobody cares about this guy, nobody cares to verify to see what happened to him why is his existence so dim he never gets the girl he already had, nobody cares if hes sad, cos his presence only messes the story he is a dead deal's signatory no hes done no crime hes at the wrong place at the wrong time this is an ode to my other guy, i often wonder why, why did it happen to him, thinking about it makes me grim. but there is no one to blame, and its going to remain the same. all he did was right, but he never even got a chance to fight. but there is no use thinking about it cos its over and that's it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2016 2:10:00 PM
amrita michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2015 7:18:00 PM
a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 6/27/2011 4:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amrita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Amrita Michael
Date: 6/28/2011 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Carol.

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