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Ode To the Ice Man

They found you lying on a mountainside, Encased in ice, your preservation good, They wondered how you’d lived and how you died, And were you buried on the place you’d stood? You were a marvel, showing us so much About your way of life, the foods you ate, They found an arrow in your frozen clutch And even learnt the way you’d met your fate. They had to know how old you were in truth And carbon dated slivers from your tooth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/15/2011 3:34:00 PM
only u can create something so clever Jack and yet have it mean something so historical too luv.. good luck in the contest...
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:29:00 PM
What a way to start off a new week but to read some fresh new poetry. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing with us Jack. Hoping you have a wonderful week full of hope, love, good health, and much inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:25:00 PM
Fabulous write, Jack. Compelling idea. I wonder if an "ice man" has really been found. I know they found a frozen woolly mammoth eating a buttercup flower in frozen trundra. Would love to see this Ice Man! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2011 9:19:00 PM
Well, I never would have thought of this in a million years..creative..to say the least. BG
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:17:00 PM
You have quite a sense of humor Jack, these relics can turn up a lot of info and your seem to have found the way to describe.
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