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Ode To Sleep

Slow and steady, I follow the winding black road to no where. A stream of gray smoke escapes my lips, and it begins to swirl, folding over itself until vanishing with the wind. And I just drive. I feel the night air as it hits my face, covering me in cold. I inhale more black tar, exhaling less fear, I can breathe once more. The fresh air of the night, becomes a friendly acquaintance hovering over me, and excusing me for interrupting it. And I just drive. The yellow lines flash by me as I sit, stepping on the gas, moving faster hoping the night will send me to the Day. I drive over the lines and onto a ledge, over looking the mountains. I can almost touch Orion's Belt. I inhale once more, white smoke escaping, as I flick my friend, saying bye for the last time. Up through the mountains where I hit the acceleration and fly Ode to my last cigarette, and now I just drive into the sun. I just drive.

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Date: 12/11/2015 3:20:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Elizabeth Cabrera
Date: 12/14/2015 10:06:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much! I appreciate it! :)
Date: 12/10/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Elizabeth Cabrera
Date: 12/11/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thank you very much! I'd love to get to know you, and your poetry as well. :)
Date: 12/10/2015 4:55:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Elizabeth Cabrera
Date: 12/11/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thank you for the welcoming, Linda! :)

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