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Ode To My Village

When I stand on the Hills and stare down, while milky sunbeams shine asound, I admire the grace with which spreads my Village, its glories and innocence. Oh my Village! that valley wherein I first kicked, That place where I first experienced my birth, That Paradise where the birds play and cling While happy children cuddle and sing. That Valley wherein I ate Irish Potatoes Drank sweet palm wine and ran wild, Where I savoured sweet achu, hunted rat mole. Oh! life so pure! Oh, my sweet grandmother and father! They raised me to love this sweet land. They told me one morning as I stretched- "Mowi, yu'u, there is no better place than home." Now I understand while I behold the radiance, The opulence of this village Politicians want to steal, Politicians and leaders so neglect- But I say to them, "you are wicked, wicked!" "If there is a place that is home to me, Where I will love to grow and make square, Where I'll love to hug and bless It is my village Bamendankwe."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/24/2013 12:42:00 PM
WOW, Am... astonished now you make want to visit Bamendarelating to the meaning of this poem is something i've never experienced. . Wow! I wish i grew up in my own village and could say so much about my village. Well i guess that's gone now cos i ain't having another chance. Good job. >>HENSHAW<<< P.S I haven't been writing recently because am so caught up with book work. Thanks.
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Date: 10/13/2013 8:00:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute. Your words turned it from merely a place to life, and emotion flowing freely as the air.
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Gerald Nforche
Date: 10/13/2013 9:00:00 AM
thank you MONTEREY
Date: 10/13/2013 7:22:00 AM
- A very lovely written poem, Gerald ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gerald Nforche
Date: 10/13/2013 9:02:00 AM
gracias amiga

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