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Ode To My Love

Ode to my Love
Your immense black eyes, so cherished and dazzling Your radiant toned skin that shines like daylight Hands as soft as sheet of linen And a childlike feet that is also soft and clean His smile makes every each day complete His sweet caress warmth my cold numb feeling When you glance, it just melts me away And when you stare I am stunned Your soft voice that makes things unruffled Your sweetness that run over Heartbreak to pleasantry, sorrow to laughter Makes every bitter moment better The man who take same step as mine Partaking every wonderful feeling Selfless, Patience, and Loving Oh how I love to love my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/13/2013 7:54:00 PM
Ana Mae. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/13/2013 11:01:00 AM
h8 Ana,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:19:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Ana Mae ! - Lovely & sweet !!! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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