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Ode To My First Born

Red hair From my dad. Does not describe my beautiful child. She is poised, calm and serene. My precious, clever queen. First born, to two nuts. Silver spoon. Missing. Beauty, brains. Had a loving start. So forgave for breaking her heart. Feels she needs to be in charge. Relax babe, I am no longer up in arms. Always there for her younger sisters. When I was not fit to be their mistress. I love your calm. Your "In control." So pleased you are a perfect mould. Of my confidence and Dad's calm. His brains. My music. So proud. Can't find words. Thank you Edna For letting me be yours. xx

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 6:43:00 AM
Wow Jean she sure is stunning!!! what a wonderful tribute:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/9/2016 7:17:00 AM
She sure is!! Thank you Jan. Hope all is well with you.
Date: 5/9/2016 6:25:00 AM
Jean, a beautiful and precious read about your first born. Skat
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Date: 5/9/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Skat.

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