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Ode To Lilies

"O Yellow Lily! You smilingly bloom Early in the morning in my terrace garden, In a jiffy, you take away all gloom, Tell me, in front of you, can any heart harden?" "O White Lily! What makes your face to brighter shine? What do you nod at behind my kitchen window? How do you dress so beautifully every morn? Lovely your visage, each detail crafted so fine, My heartbeat, seeing you, reaches a crescendo, I write to thank you, my heart's with happiness torn." "O poet! I bloom where God has placed me, Bursting at crack of dawn, just as He tells me to, If on seeing me, your gloom turns to glee, That's all His doing, I'm just a lily for you." "O dear friend! I've learned to enjoy my life, it's short, To God, my Creator, I'm nodding back my thanks, For He clothes me majestic, though I'm mere flora, Here today, gone tomorrow, I bud to exhort - Live without worries, He'll provide from His rich banks, Thank God if you would, shine for Him each aurora." Even the lovely lilies of the field Remember to praise God, how then can I forget? As long as I live, my lips can't be sealed, Great lessons I have learnt from these lilies I met. 04/11/17 1st stanza- Strophe 2nd stanza- Antistrophe 3rd stanza- Epode Rhyme scheme: abab cdecde, abab cdecde, abab Syllable count : 1st and 2nd stanzas: 10 12 10 12 12 12 12 12 12 12 3rd stanza: 10 12 10 12

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Date: 12/20/2017 9:28:00 AM
Wow I can see why this won. Big congrats. Such an awesome poem inspired by a flower and I love flowers so this just leaves me swaying. Marvellous rhyme scheme and message, I was ESP captivated how u acknowledged God, Sth I like to do and I have an unposted poem in which I mention plants praying to God but your version was great ahh. Kudos.
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Date: 4/30/2017 7:40:00 PM
Love it, caught my eye, because my mom's name is Lillian of which I wrote a poem for her. Also God's Grace :)
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Date: 4/15/2017 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful piece, Jo. You truly have the heart and soul of a poet! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:47:00 AM
So lovely, Jo!
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Date: 4/13/2017 8:33:00 AM
This is so very beautiful, Jo, and was my favorite in the contest. Congratulations on 3rd, not 4th...Well done, sweet friend.
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Date: 4/13/2017 5:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem Jo..Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/13/2017 4:53:00 AM
excellent rendition and also good use of technic flows beautifully just like this superb flower congrats on 4th place Jo hugs
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 4/13/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shadow:) all glory be to God Almighty:)
Date: 4/13/2017 1:01:00 AM
Wonderful composition. I love. Best wishes for contest
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Date: 4/11/2017 11:47:00 PM
Ha! Indeed, Jo. : ) Such a fine flower. Hardy, they are. A couple decades ago I put in a horrendous amount of flowers, and 98% of them died off. Daffodils and lilies, though - tough!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/13/2017 4:51:00 AM
sounds like you either forgot to water them or you under watered, new flowers need daily watering so that the roots can establish themselves hugs
Date: 4/11/2017 3:31:00 PM
A fabulous ode to a beautiful flower - I have started my poem and drawn a blank - i hope you place highly with this gem of a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2017 1:10:00 PM
- Wonderful poem Jo, a beautiful view with Lilies - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely Easter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/11/2017 12:26:00 PM
Beautifully written Jo. Your poem is amazing. I love the feel of this and the phrase choices as well as the overall message. I know what you mean by seeing an Easter lily bloom, it is a magical sight indeed. This has to be one of your best in my opinion.
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