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Ode To Dawn

A breath is drawn, as morning dawns the flute, to lips, does rise mellow notes echo ‘round as sunlight streaks the skies Night shadows fade, dim canyon walls glow purple, red and pink dulcet tones cascading for thirsty souls to drink Daybreaks first blush, a dewy kiss arouse a sleepy world harmony meets horizon the sunrise has unfurled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/5/2009 8:52:00 AM
Dawn is beautiful in this poets hands. I have written some called out on the porch that celebrate dawn. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 5/3/2009 9:44:00 PM
3 great entries, good lck...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your three poems making it into the semi finals Trudy. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2008 5:57:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. Puts me in mind of "Sunrise" from Peer Gynt by Edvard Grieg. This definitely - like most poetry - should be read aloud....and to music. Love, daver
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Date: 10/8/2008 10:48:00 PM
Now this is pure "quality." Congrats on you feature. By the way my new book has just been released. Here are the links: Early order “Poet Coet” through Target on-line: http://www.target.com/Poet-Coet-Ed/dp/0615242111 Preview “Poet Coet”at: http://www.lulu.com/content/3382293 I'd appreciate your spreading the word. Thanks. ED
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Date: 10/8/2008 11:05:00 AM
Trudy Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Laura :0)
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Date: 10/6/2008 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Trudy on your beautiful poetry being featured this week! How nice to be featured along with your mom! Well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations Trudy on your "Ode To Dawn" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:50:00 PM
Glad this was featured, I missed it the first time! Nicely done, beautiful images. ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2008 3:18:00 PM
Interesting imagery forwards your thoughts in this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/14/2008 1:18:00 PM
Extremely beautiful imagery with excellent rhyme and flow. Well done! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/13/2008 6:02:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and rhyme to forward your thoughts in this one. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/13/2008 11:20:00 AM
beautiful poem and welcome to poetry soup, do come and check out some of my poetry as well.
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Date: 9/12/2008 10:48:00 PM
This was an amazing write, full of beautiful imagery..and great use of words.Best wishes
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