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Ode To a San Francisco Head

It’s that beat Bang! arms around the porcelain alter shared by music gods a plenty The Smash! drowns the sweetness as the Boom! carries away the wrong with the Shrill! stabilizing the united chaos tears make their way to reddened arms and Sizzle! towards the heavens now swaying with the Ba Ba Ba! images appear between tears where truth and purity are found collapsing to rest with a sweaty Slide! upturned by reality breathing hard is the Beat Beat Beat! of paralysis then dipped into the icy mercy of a Shout! and then a muffled trumpets prayer only to awaken to a deafening Slam! and an earth moving Shake! only then experience takes hold Sa Sa Wop!

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Date: 5/28/2013 10:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:27:00 PM
JUSTIN, congrats with your jazzy poem... luv~PD
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Date: 5/27/2013 4:54:00 AM
Many Congratulations xx
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Date: 5/26/2013 8:03:00 PM
Best description of throwing up drunk I have read to date...oh and the hangover after...Very Jazzy.. Are you an Aussie? Congratulations on your win... SuZ
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