Ode To a Lover's Sleep

A place where the subconscious freely flows, Meanwhile a heart of innocence,Love grows. There all escape the world and its cruelty, It is a sanctuary of purity. Similar places are never found, Nor, are any souls with chains bound. Alas,Like Life it is a vapor, Lasting only a moment before taper. Oh! To taste the sweet kiss of its lips,so divine. Gladly residing at this space of time, Extremely satisfied with peace of mind. Never will I forget the blissful kiss,so sweet, . Ode to a Lover's sleep

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Matthew Anish

Date: 9/16/2014 10:56:00 PM

How touching! Just watched a film about the life of James Dean and then read this poem. Reading this poem is a nice way to end the day. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 9/19/2014 12:27:00 PM

I think it is too:) thx for stopping by:)-Love Ettie

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/1/2014 12:19:00 AM

Lovey masterpiece here. I loved all of the lines...so profound and precious with such deep meaning. Great job! ~

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/3/2014 2:56:00 PM

Awe thx alot David :-)-Love Ettie

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/30/2014 10:42:00 PM

A lovely flowing piece here. My favorite lines: "Oh! To taste the sweet kiss of its lips,so divine. Gladly residing at this space of time,"...such heartfelt and deep expression. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/3/2014 2:57:00 PM

Thanks I'm glad you liked it:))Love Ettie

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/30/2014 3:05:00 PM

Moving and lovely words here. Things are O.K. on the Lower East Side. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/30/2014 3:15:00 PM

Glad to hear it My friend thx for stopping by....Come again!lolz;)-Love Ettie