Odd Shaped Love

. Lovely Livid love Lachrymiform Light lanky lucky girl Leggy

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/24/2011 6:31:00 AM

Reminds me of a Dali painting I saw.

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2011 6:51:00 PM

So much in a few words, just wonderful~~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2011 3:21:00 PM

So cute, Sara. I can see this tall, slim, beautiful girl clearly in your words. Perhaps one who looks like Julia Roberts? If you changed "girl" to "lady," every single word would begin with "L." Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2011 2:48:00 PM

Hey a new word, lachrymiform! Too bad I am going too fast to look it up. TEll me what it means,sara!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2011 2:23:00 PM

i wanna comment using l's lol, enjoyed your alliteration on odd shaped love Sarah,..p.d.

John Rhinem

Date: 2/19/2011 1:48:00 PM

Smile* ~ Quite creative amid the usage of the "L" character my dear and the title surely somehow fits the body of the poe itself I would surely say for, tears and bruises most definitly would seem but, "An Odd Shaped Love, 'Indeed'" ~ "Wonderful Creation Amid The, 'Silverishblue'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:) ~