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October's Waterdroplets Etheree

Gold Reflects Through rain drenched trees; a mirror is the leaf lined walk. Her umbrella repells small, cold, damp waterdroplets. Alone splashing in October's beauty; as fall's glory slowly fades to bare limbs exposed, waiting for first snow. Inspired by Andrea Dietrich's Etheree Contest Written: September 22, 2015

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/9/2015 11:06:00 PM

I really liked your approach to the October theme, Sara. The beautiful imagery brings to life those cold, rainy days of fall. Nicely done!... Congrats on a great win!

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:27:00 PM

Sara, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/1/2015 9:05:00 PM

"...bare limbs exposed waiting for first snow" made me shiver! Poor trees... Great imagery... Congrats Sara! PS. Thanks for the visit earlier. hugs!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/1/2015 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations for your WIN Sara! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:18:00 AM

Great imagery, Sara. BIG congrats in my contest. (loved the mirror part)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/25/2015 7:51:00 PM

I could feel this poem and see the mirror-sidewalk. An excellent and beautiful description of a reality our senses absorb. Very, very good ... CayCay