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October's Gifts

Of all the months, the days of October Call to me with a voice like no other The harvest almost done, silos filling Over night the color palate changes Birds have gathered for their flight Enchantment of the year's first fireside Renewing rest of winter soon to come

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Date: 9/8/2011 11:13:00 PM
Great write in praise of October. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:27:00 PM
Hi Barbara, I really like the flow of your poem. Yes the silos are filling, its sort of reassuring isn't it. Its a nice take on fall. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,Barbara
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:03:00 PM
Creative winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:13:00 PM
congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, lovely portrayal of the month of october...
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:41:00 PM
That fireside sounds so welcoming! Many congrats to you, Barbara : )
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:38:00 PM
I liked the flow of this one, Barbara. And I especially was charmed by the second line. Some things do 'speak' to us, don't they? I get some kind of kick out of apple trees, September nights and even the fall rain feels cleansing. Cheers and big congrats, Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:05:00 PM
Oh yes, dear LNC. October is my favorite month as well. What a lovely acrostic! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:59:00 PM
hey Barbara congrats on your win,David
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNE" Barbara. A great pleasure to see your poem in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congrats BG on first place win with this cool write on Fall ...
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:41:00 PM
My LOVE, Congratulations, I'm sure YOU will be in the top of Carol's Winners Circle Excellent Images "Over night the color Palate changes"A Superb LINE With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOURS...HG(Harry )
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:00:00 AM
Good luck in the contest! Its beautifull, except for. "...rest of winter soon to come" ;)
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Date: 9/3/2011 8:48:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:41:00 PM
good luck for the contest my friend~~~smile~~~*-*jun-jun
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