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October Welkin

A shared nature scheme— Tree and sky color madness On phantasm cheeks— Still leaves fall in silk whispers Grasp for the sun's set on me.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2023 10:15:00 AM

Love the line about the leaves. Silk whispers is so beautiful.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/31/2023 6:35:00 AM

Great imagery and nicely penned tanks, about autumn, Paige.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/30/2023 1:47:00 AM

Nice Autumn Tanka, my friend. I liked the ... tree and sky madness line. :-) Have a pleasant week, Paige. Bill

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2023 3:49:00 PM

Still leaves fall in silk whispers...love that. Such beautiful imagery. Lovely poem.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 10:29:00 AM

Still leaves fall in silk whispers! Ahhh yess my beautiful soul! I agree how delicate and serene is the way you articulate your words especially the flow is seamless and imagery is gorgeous! You are such a talented soul! Keep shining and sharing always! Pleasure reading u

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 4:52:00 AM

I agree...autumn does have a certain 'madness' in its expression. Maybe that's why I like autumn so much. A lovely write. Enjoy your day, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 10/26/2023 8:35:00 PM

the madness of autumn, the eternal gift - nicely composed

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/26/2023 5:39:00 PM

Very pretty!