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October Morn Rising

like a spotted fawn digging with a tender hoof in the drifting leaves morning paints an autumn song smiles upon the vivid mists

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/14/2012 4:20:00 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
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Date: 10/13/2012 10:13:00 PM
nice tanka , well done. lee
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Date: 10/12/2012 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Deb :)
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Date: 10/12/2012 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win Deb! Loved this on my first read.
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Date: 10/12/2012 3:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/12/2012 12:22:00 AM
Another fall poem. Just love them like this. Big congrats.
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Date: 10/11/2012 11:12:00 PM
Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.
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Date: 10/11/2012 11:05:00 PM
Beautiful scenery Deb! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/11/2012 4:16:00 PM
ahhhh personification of the dawn, one of my fav themes! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:53:00 PM
Deb, , enjoyed stopping by;-) Good night~ LINDA
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:33:00 PM
Deb, I love the image of this fawn in the early morning mist, well done...David
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Date: 10/5/2012 2:20:00 AM
Just beautiful, Deb - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:32:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here Deb.Love this.
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