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October Moon

October moon, October moon, as you come out tonight, please shine on me your light. Let some guitars play a tune to serenade my love this night. October moon - you are beautiful. Especially on this night. Surrounded by stars, you are the Queen and the stars form your crown, october moon, October moon. As the wind blows a cool breeze, I want to be in my lover's arms, on this night October moon, October moon...
10/11/2012 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/27/2012 9:09:00 AM
Nice poem! My late father used to qoute Thomas Wolfe to me "The scurrying of the leaves in old October". Peace and love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/16/2012 2:17:00 PM
Hello Lucilla, October is my favorite month. I love the joy you seek through its beams.... always..pd
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Date: 10/13/2012 1:26:00 AM
I love the lilting lyrical sound of this, October is queen of the fall.
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Date: 10/12/2012 4:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this romantic creation...I hope that the lover's arms under the moon rings true for you..Sara
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Date: 10/12/2012 1:37:00 PM
‡ These Lovely Words Could Become Lyrics Within An Enchanting Love Song. I Do Love The Moon And October Beginning The Festive Holiday Season, Beautiful Lucilla. You Know I Have Noticed A Bright Shining Star Thousands Of Miles Above Five Other Smaller Stars Forming A 'V' Amid The Night Sky ? The Moon Could Be As A Scoop Of Ice Cream Within Their Comb, Haha. Very Beautiful, And Thank You For Your Kind Visit. Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/12/2012 9:48:00 AM
Love is in the air!! A real beauty of a poem Lucilla, light and flirty. I will be happy to have you enter my next contest, please feel free to do so. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/12/2012 8:45:00 AM
wow this is is so relaxing Lucilla, so smooth, an injection of sincerity, you are indeed a gem....
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Date: 10/11/2012 2:20:00 PM
We have really October moon tonight Lucilla - Star clear and moonlight (no rain - no wind) A really lovely October evening / night, so that your lovely poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise:
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Date: 10/11/2012 2:21:00 PM
I have responded to your S-Mail. :)

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