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October Leaf

October sunrise Bursts of jubilant color Lonely leaf falling Written on August 4, 2014 for LEAF, FEATHER, SHELL or FLAKE - Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/8/2014 4:16:00 PM
Delightful imagery of the falling leaf, it's final demise from bloom. Nice one Gina, James.....
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Date: 8/19/2014 8:37:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Regina. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/18/2014 5:44:00 AM
I like the images in this haiku, Regina. congrats
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Date: 8/18/2014 1:53:00 AM
a 'ku so beautifully penned, regina... applause to you!
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:21:00 PM
Regina, Congratulations, in Andrea's sorta Shell, contest:)....Love Linda
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Date: 8/17/2014 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations, Regina on a beautiful win!!! I enjoyed reading this piece - excellent write! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations in my contest with this lovely leaf poem. You painted a great October scene! soupmail.
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Date: 8/17/2014 5:58:00 PM
wonderful imagery Regina - Autumn is just around the corner and I love the autumnal colours they are some of my favourites:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:34:00 AM
Autumn is my favorite season, and you have managed to capture much of it's beauty in just three short lines! A lovely poem, Regina! Good luck in Andrea's contest!
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:43:00 PM
Oh I love fall. What great visions you create in such a short amount of time. Well done :)
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/4/2014 9:56:00 PM
Thank you so much. You're so sweet!!! Happy writing and God bless you.
Date: 8/4/2014 7:40:00 PM
nice one, regina! good luck in the contest...
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/4/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate your kind comments and God bless you. Happy writing.

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