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October Hides

An Autumn rain teases the roses Splashes within cupped petals Challenges the lone bumble bee To pollinate the late bloomers Chipmunks grapple with wet acorns Leaf armadas ride the rapids A lone goose questions its choice Children know what the puddle’s for October hides behind next Sunday Readying its cornstalk mazes Spicing up its pumpkin-ness Adding its scents to Fall’s colors

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Date: 9/25/2023 5:00:00 PM
I love this. Creative. Well done. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:17:00 PM
You make originality look easy John - great poem
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Date: 9/25/2023 12:44:00 PM
what fantastic imagery John I really love' Leaf armadas ride the rapids' the lone goose and children in the puddles, you sure made me smile!:-) hugs Jan xx
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