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October Etheree

Breath, floats soft. A white mist, from a lake's chill, without warm restraint. Rising slowing silent. October is calling now, dressed in burning red and orange. Captivating before the leaves turn and Winter comes with its cold naked bark. 9/22/15

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Date: 10/5/2015 5:34:00 PM
Good flow to this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:25:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2015 2:13:00 AM
this is very pretty , Frederic. It's a poem with a "sigh" Congrats for your win with this fine etheree.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/1/2015 5:34:00 PM
thank you my poetic friend, first one I've ever written
Date: 9/23/2015 12:11:00 PM
Frederic, such a dreamy and tranquil write 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, erotic ...
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Date: 9/23/2015 2:51:00 AM
Frederic, the mild soothing way you represent the scene then ending up with a lil bite of harshness.. plus a nice imagery!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 9/22/2015 4:39:00 PM
Fabulous Frederic. I love the beginning of Autumn. It is spectacular.
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