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October Bliss November Dreams

we sit under the umbrella of an October Bliss yet with snow skiing in mind gaze upon our November Dreams wide eyed, bathe in mesmerising tints...the mountains can wait Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest Name: OCTOBER BLISS / NOVEMBER DREAMS Form: Sijo 09~10~2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/15/2014 9:44:00 PM

Just noticed I missed this one. Congratulations on your win Maurice. Well written.

David Mohn

Date: 10/12/2014 7:40:00 PM

Nicely combined Maurice...congrats on your win

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/12/2014 3:43:00 PM

Hi Maurice, Very nice, crisp, concise images. Very compact, and well structured. Congratulations on your win and interesting entry. Have a pleasant evening. Earl

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/12/2014 3:23:00 PM

Nice poem, Maurice -- congrats on your win! Sandra

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2014 12:44:00 PM

Congrats...I was thinking SOHO and since I have never been there didn't write one.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:11:00 AM

Brilliant wid wonderful imagery Maurice! Congrats on huge win! Loved the ending much,, yes the mountains can surely wait!

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:49:00 AM

Some very blissful dreams Maurice.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/12/2014 8:43:00 AM

Bravo, Maurice and congratulations on an excellent write and well-deserved win! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 7:12:00 AM

Clever take on a dual theme, Maurice! Lovely sigo which starts off with a captivating line. Congrats on your fine win! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:19:00 AM

Oh you charmer getting both titles in and getting a great win:-) hugs jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 2:07:00 AM

Well worded write on both the months, Maurice. congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:43:00 AM

So I have finally seen your combined October Bliss/November dreams and you nicely put them together! The first line is awesome!! Congrats in my contest, (love the romanticism of this one)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/10/2014 1:17:00 AM

Snow is a beautiful sight, but the winter season can wait it's turn, until we are done enjoying the autumn!.... I really enjoyed this lovely write, Maurice. Nicely done! Good luck in Andrea's contest!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/9/2014 7:00:00 PM

great pen maurice

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/9/2014 5:20:00 PM

:) thats cool

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2014 4:09:00 PM

Ow Winter on our mind,Spring's lake baths passed us by,enjoying this coloured bliss,November dreams We kiss :.).I love your seasons sijo Maurice..The mountain can wait for now,along with the mistle- toe and the red flame breasted cardinal.Your sijo is enchantingly beautiful and so inspiring!Charma

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 4:08:00 PM

:) well done, Maurice !! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/9/2014 2:56:00 PM

Yes they can...we're not getting younger :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/10/2014 2:02:00 PM

I love the new math they are teaching :)

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/10/2014 2:00:00 PM

yes I am. I get younger everyday. two years ago I was 58 now I'm 56.