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October Bliss

October bliss Long wait ends, adieu summers, vibrant colours, October bliss, Goodbye heat, passion will creep, turbulence weaves, down rolls the grief, Pleasant breeze, pink and lavender, flowers at peak, dancing leaves! Sijo- 3444,3444,3543 Written October 9th, 2014 For contest 'October bliss or November dreams' By Andrea Dietrich Awarded 9th place

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2014 3:23:00 AM

A very beautiful piece my dear friend Dr. Upma! I love it. Many congrats on your win too. I am so glad to share the honor with you. Big hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 7:12:00 PM

I like the fragments that fill in and finish the whole puzzle. Congratulations on your win.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2014 5:45:00 PM

Nice and lovely piece,great poetess.....Congrats on your win...

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:49:00 AM

lovely to read this again Dr Sharma:-) many congrats. hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 5:42:00 AM

Lovely staccato sigo peppered with vivid imagery. Very enjoyable, Upma. Congrats on yet another win. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:39:00 AM

Lovely Write on October bliss, Dr. Upma,congrats

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/12/2014 4:49:00 AM

a typical exuberance after prolonged Indian summers. Congrats Upma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 1:05:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem for October. I just was wanting to see you use fuller sentences instead of a series of small sentences with commas between them. However, each item you mentioned in that last line was very pretty imagery. Congrats in my contest, Dr. Upma.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

lovely sijo Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 10/9/2014 9:59:00 AM

Thnx Jan! U r kind to me!