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diamond coated grass cloudy breath on frosted pane the winter beckons

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/20/2015 8:13:00 PM

A well structured HAIKU (575) with gorgeous language/imagery. I could FEEL the cold! Well done my friend... Keith

Viv Wigley
Date: 12/20/2015 8:29:00 PM

Thanks, Keith. Little chance of frosted panes thus far, though. Regards, Viv

James Inman

Date: 10/18/2015 1:38:00 PM

So adept at this form. Love your Haiku.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/17/2015 4:51:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Viv! Love the imagery, and the picture, too. [ Heard you have a lot on your plate at the moment, my friend. All the best and take care. ] // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/18/2015 11:41:00 AM

Thanks Paul, yes, a busy time at present, but will get to touch base shortly. Hope you are well. Regards, Viv

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/17/2015 11:21:00 AM

You have a beautiful view, sir. And yes, we are all so lucky/fortunate/blessed to experience a brief bit of the good life. I hope that you and I have much more of it in store for us prior to our flights out of here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 8:16:00 PM

oh my, this is the most beautiful short poem I have read today!!! very creative.

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/16/2015 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I guess it'll be a while yet until Utah sees a good frost.... Hugs, Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 8:16:00 PM

love the picture too.

Julia Ward

Date: 10/16/2015 1:56:00 AM

It does indeed... A nice write, Viv. Julia, xx

Julia Ward
Date: 10/18/2015 11:48:00 AM

Yes, I'm fine thanks, Viv... As you say, winter subjects will occupy us soon. Julia, xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/18/2015 11:44:00 AM

..... and on the upside, poets will switch to winter mode, and I'll have to put my keyboard warmer on :). Thanks for dropping by, Julia, hope you're OK. Viv x

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/15/2015 11:09:00 PM

What a stunning poem and photo, I tip my hat to you!

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/16/2015 12:47:00 AM

Thanks Arthur, my warmer clothes have had their moths evicted- I'm all set. Regards, Viv

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2015 3:17:00 AM

- Autumn is truly arrived, just before frost at night now - A wonderful haiku, Viv! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/14/2015 11:44:00 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise, it won't be long now- the thick woolly clothes in my wardrobe are all moving to the front, in readiness- which is spooky :O . Klems, Viv x

Theresa Cw

Date: 10/14/2015 1:19:00 AM

Sure do love this beauty of an October Haiku of yours Viv. Glad I stopped by for this beautiful of a diamond coated grass. hugs Theresa

Viv Wigley
Date: 10/14/2015 1:35:00 AM

Thanks, Theresa, it's starting to get cool and crisp over here now. Nature's getting ready for bed. Viv x