October

Oh how I would give the soul of me Could I turn back the clock set free To reach out and find you here Oh what I'd give for yesteryear But too much time has ticked away Ending dreams from yesterday Recalling you, I kneel to pray 8/10/15 10-9th

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 11/11/2015 4:05:00 PM

Wonderful tribute washed in love. Judy, I meant to tell you, your images/pictures attached to poems; great selections. I don't yet know how to insert to my poems, still somewhat new to Soup. Help...

Judy Konos
Date: 11/11/2015 4:43:00 PM

Of course I will help in anyway that I can. Will need to send you a soup mail....let me know if you are interested....take care Judy

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/15/2015 12:27:00 PM

The setting sun of an annual day. Begins in October, not in May. And when the sun has finally set. A brand new day this world does get. But in our hearts the past departs and never does return. Except when we recall at last those things we'll always yearn. Got a rake? :)

Judy Konos
Date: 8/15/2015 2:43:00 PM

Take two aspirins and call us in the morning

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/14/2015 4:07:00 PM

October is the time....that I get to shine....release and unwind....because its not only yours, its also mine....;)

Judy Konos
Date: 8/14/2015 4:30:00 PM

Shine on Eric thanks for stopping by

Julia Ward

Date: 8/14/2015 12:13:00 AM

I enjoyed your birth-month poem with its deep sentiments, especially at the first line. Best wishes, Julia

Judy Konos
Date: 8/14/2015 4:31:00 PM

Thanks Julia....appreciate it...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2015 11:15:00 PM

This is a wonderful way to do your October theme, Judy, and the message is so clear to me.well, if I got it right! Prayers still coming.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/12/2015 4:15:00 AM

You penned a very beautiful poem for one of the best months of the year, my dear friend Judy. I love it sooo much and I'll fave it if you don't mind. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for appreciating my flag poem in your contest. More blessings! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2015 9:26:00 AM

I found this so emotional to read Judy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx