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Below is the poem entitled October which was written by poet Tamryn Pelser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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There is disquiet in the air tonight
The noise is still is sullen
Summery with a hint of Sunday blue.

A cricket in the Karoo
A mom sitting on the patio
Howling at the moon
Far far away.

A circular spiral of panic
Then nothing
Not even a breath.

The fever in me recognises the fever in you

Good riddance
Thy will be done.


Copyright © Tamryn Pelser

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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:39:00 PM
    I forgot to tell you, October is my friend, and I love riding the October sky, one the month arrives... love the little gem poem, on my favorite month of the year,.. a nice little howl at the moon... a new favorite poem, thank you very much... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Tamryn, ... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Welcome to the Soup. Rick

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:00:00 AM
    Great Write.. I wonder how many others will relate to the Karoo-- except us fellow S/Africans :) Welcome to P/Soup