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October 3, 2004

-The First Poem I Ever Wrote........................ On October 3, 2004 I felt I didn't want to live anymore It wasn't my fault what happened to you I regret it very much and that is very true I promise you I paid my debt And I haven't got over it yet Man I wish you weren't dead I think it should've been me instead We should've never went to the factory That stupid forklift will forever blind me Every time I'm alone in my room I think about the death of David Broom

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Date: 6/13/2010 12:00:00 PM
Sad thoughts, hope it is fiction. I can remember things I wish I could change but I can't. Have to let it go.
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Date: 2/23/2010 10:19:00 AM
Sad...but deep at the same time. You have an amazing mind! :)
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