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October 31

The night of frights. I was a vampire. She was a witch. He was the Grim Reaper. Second neighborhood Sore stomachs Sore feet Sore mouths from smiling Bags a little heavier Shoulders a lot lighter Third neighborhood She laughed too wildly But we all did I assumed it was the Snickers, But I began to see something in her eyes Only when I was looking for it A glimmer, a gleam A secret plot she hadn’t yet revealed. Fourth neighborhood He was a bit too serious Too sullen, sad And his scythe began to shine like steel I assumed it was the moonlight And I assumed the fallen person behind him Had tripped But why wouldn’t he stand up? Last neighborhood Her face had grown waxy In a way no costume makeup could create And the broom in her hand Was she even holding it anymore? Or was it drifting alongside her? And her smile was making her face stretch In unnatural ways. Like wax melting down a candle. But no I was just tired. And when he walked Did that patch of grass shrivel, Beneath his feet? Did he have feet? Was he just gliding on air? No, its just getting dark out. Almost home Laughing through My fanged teeth Began to feel real And it scared me My skin was an unnatural pale But it was just the streetlights? Pawing through my candy Not finding something satisfying enough I was thirsty For what Rather, for who? But I wasn’t stupid Blood or not And when death walked toward me? I flew away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/7/2018 8:00:00 AM
Iris, this is a wonderfully spooky Halloween Horror story.....now go back inside - the sun's coming out
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Iris Blade
Date: 1/7/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so much John, I though I would try to write a scary poem and it turned out well. Have a great day!
Date: 10/26/2017 8:54:00 AM
I dont like halloween.. but your wrote this very well..
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/26/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, I personally love the holiday but I know many who don't. Have a nice day!
Date: 10/25/2017 10:04:00 PM
A crazy write! Enjoyed!
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/26/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you and happy Halloween!
Date: 10/25/2017 10:02:00 PM
OH so much fun :) reads like a deliciously entertaining bad trip, fabulous! xomo
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Iris Blade
Date: 10/26/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it!

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