Oceanside

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By Dawne Zacharias Walking on the sands towards the oceans beckoning call blue sky with soft white clouds overhead waves reaching out on the shoreline seagulls curious, fly close by waves climax into foam formations shades of aquamarine, blue and green I close my eyes and feel the spray from the tumbling waves before me the Sun's healing rays restores my soul, I am whole again.

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Marc O'Brien

Date: 9/23/2019 3:19:00 PM

Very warm and soothing sentiments

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/21/2019 2:27:00 AM

Dawne, you are not only a praying woman, you understand the power of nature, meditation, and the sun. I always say the SON is in the sun. Wonderfully done, my friend. Your imagery is terrific!

Douglas Pederson

Date: 5/18/2019 2:59:00 AM

the imagery and photo is just beautiful. the ocean is one of my fav places to be and enjoy nature.