Oceans of Seaweed

oceans of seaweed adorn driftwood with green pearls... gifts from Neptune's queen *Written February 21, 2012

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/31/2012 6:42:00 PM

I am chuckling at Mr. Roboto's words below bc he is also a fan of your work...He is so sincere and has a great barometer of measuring one's character too!...Only someone who spends as much time on the oceanfront as you could have came up with an enchanting haiku such as this one...dripping with personification...fabuloso!....(I invented my own version of Italian!) ha ha...A great 3 lines from you!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/25/2012 12:42:00 PM

Wow, I just love this one, Carolyn

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/22/2012 9:52:00 PM

I do not know how you make time to be be active on the soup, but you do it and do it well. When I come to this site, I try to make sure to read your stuff because it is damn good. I love Neptune, Stephen Hawking promised me just last night from his computer assisted voicebox that I WOULD GET TO VISIT NEPTUNE ONE DAY! via my super Worm Hole Time Machine. It's a toss up tho' on that and ATLANTIS :) I do not just like your writing, but I happen to have a high opinion of your character as well!JSL~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2012 11:27:00 AM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading..I can picture the scene..I could use a beach break but it is still too cold for that I know..Thanks for stopping by..Karter is here again today..He is napping now and the angels guard him in his sleep..Have a great day..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2012 11:28:00 AM

Finished Hush Thoughts some this morn out on the porch for ten minutes and some while Karter naps..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 2/22/2012 11:18:00 AM

Yes! I can see the queen with seaweed for hair. Love the mythological image your Haiku presents. Love, daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 9:10:00 AM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Carolyn. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2012 6:59:00 AM

Love your haiku ,haiku lady -hugs..and always in my prayers.. Charma

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/21/2012 4:17:00 PM

This is a write that is beautifully written! I really enjoyed your poem this fine evening! I love how you wrote of the beauty of the seaweed that flows in from the sea! I do understand of the green pearls that comes from seaweed, wonderful inclusion into your write! Great Work!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/21/2012 12:48:00 PM

this is a beauty Carolyn, hope the week ahead will be a good one for you :) love Wilma