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Ocean's Edge

To ocean's edge I knelt to water, crouching down by a lily guilded mirror. In it I saw stars, and was saddened by the dark void in the middle. As I moved it went with me, so slowly I left, and took it all away. Leaving in my wake the stars, to shine on peacefully, over moonlit bay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 11:35:00 AM
This is a nicely detailed poem =] -Echo
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your poetry today Calum. Love, Carol
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