Ocean Waters Tossed

ocean waters tossed... very high waves white capping as Pelicans soar

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/25/2013 4:05:00 PM

Love the haiku,,, and the ocean,,, thank you for stopping by to read my Alcohol ,, have an awesome day Sara ;}

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/21/2012 1:46:00 AM

a beautiful portrait Sara .. reminds me of our beach days gone now .. in Italy this picture exists for uss to view daily but other types of birds to see .. splendid choice of theme to enter contest .. winning wishes ..my poem about my Daddy is true .. he died from pneumonia when I was 3 and he was only 33.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2012 9:35:00 PM

A great picture of those waves!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2012 3:14:00 PM

Ohh, I really love this one Sara! This is a tremendously awesome write my friend! I can completely visualize this poem in my head, vividly, and quite delightful! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!