Ocean Spray

Summer Relaxation White crested waves wildly dancing Release cool ocean spray, refreshing Beach time

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/13/2010 4:59:00 PM

Hi Audrey Jimmey A. soup mailed me and it didn't go through? can you find out what he needs to know for my contest? (PS loved your verse above ..refreshing!!!)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/9/2010 9:12:00 PM

This sure is a refreshing write, Audrey! Love the thought of ocean spray on my skin! --nikko :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/5/2010 6:56:00 PM

Oh yeah, Audrey! - 'Beach time' for sure.!...Very well done! Nothing like the ocean to refresh and renew the soul - Tim

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/5/2010 6:14:00 PM

Yes, it is! Thanks for all your kind words and I hope that you and Jimmy are reunited soon! I see you're sponsoring contests! Good! I'll try to get one done! Best , Gerard