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Ocean Rental

By Dawne Zacharias We arrived at the rental, a small house oceanside We opened the windows the salt breezes welcomed each room dropping our suitcases we looked at one another with big grins finally, running and jumping into oceans grasp The coolness enveloped our bodies splashing in the waves we see one another shining free at last Away from the pressures of the world Sweet desire springs forth from the joy we feel A newness is unconcealed pressing ourselves closely we find a new beginning of an open mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/26/2019 4:51:00 AM
NICE
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Date: 9/18/2019 7:02:00 PM
I am lying on the beach reading a book now. All you have to do is turn to your right to give me a "hi".
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Date: 8/22/2019 5:56:00 PM
You encapsulate that feeling of freedom very nicely.
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Date: 8/22/2019 4:28:00 PM
This was fun to read and dream about. Nothing like a trip to the ocean with that special someone.
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