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Ocean Dreams

When the walls seem tall and the road your on feels like an endless hall. Your place is here where the vision of tranquility is your home. No other place can hold your peace where dreams trickle slowly with cascading ease.

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/28/2012 12:54:00 PM

What a very comforting read this is Michael...that last stanza really brought it home I think... thank you for dropping by my page with your inspiring words and hugs to you as well! You sure seem to have enjoyed your holiday, yay for that!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2012 9:00:00 PM

a wall of ocean to be my home. I think it would be divine. To be a mermaid, or I'd even settle for a dolphin!! This is great stuff as usual. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. NICE seeing you back.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2012 4:26:00 PM

Michael, nice to see you here today.... awee... tickle tickle tickle... Very soothing wonderful captivating from the start thank you ..luv pd

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/10/2012 11:41:00 AM

This has such a peaceful feeling to it MJF, absolutely enjoyed reading tonight.. Enjoy the week ahead.. Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2012 10:47:00 AM

intense and intricate lines flowing as ocean waves luv .. lovely thoughts and form is wonderful.. u composed so well.. JG is so happy to read her W.K. once more .. xoxo..

David Williams

Date: 7/10/2012 4:35:00 AM

Michael I like this, it is different from your style...David

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/9/2012 3:46:00 PM

What a beautifully positive piece my friend! Sometimes the ocean seems to be the only place to find solace! And it's certainly welcomed! Wonderful write! Great Work!!