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Ocean Dream

from the sandy bottom up periscopes from depths, hidden in the sea of thoughts, through an ocean of memories scanning the distant horizon, in vision my rising sun as my waters swell a saviour, my soul motions drifting a wave, dreaming beautiful sunshine drop anchor, paradise with palm trees, the ocean calls touching beautiful colour handing out mother pearl, this treasure from deep my mutiny abandon ship, lost on this island, alone with you upon the rocks on this sandy shore I sit holding hands in the spray of beauty like a rainbow colour of light you to romance the very stones on the rocks that you sit merman calling to you mermaid

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Date: 9/6/2013 5:03:00 PM
I love fantasy poems such as this one!... Such beautiful imagery that you put into this poem!...Sometimes love can make you feel like you are on an island, because you see no one but them.... I loved this one, too!...Great minds think alike once again, I am posting a poem about mermaids tonight!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 5:25:00 PM
OH I CANT WAIT IS MERMAN INVITED HA HA OH MIDNIGHT POSTING HA HA
Date: 9/6/2013 6:37:00 AM
In the beginning when i joined poetrysoup i wrote something about a mermaid.This reminds me of those sweet times..Of course your poem is much more beautiful then the one i ve written back then.Your poems are like words i want to express but somehow cannot.To be lost on an island is always an adventure..They say treasures are always found.Lovely dreamy post.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 4:57:00 PM
YOUR WORDS EXPRESS HOW BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE AN ISLAND IS TWO HEARTS LOST IN EACH OTHER AS ONE IN A BEAUTIFUL FEELING THE ADVENTURE WITHIN THE EMOTION THE MOST VALUABLE OF TREASURES A STAR SHINES THANK YOU FROM THE HEART APPRECIATED BEAUTIFUL

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